This comic was a little bit difficult for me to decide what I thought about it. I was really digging the first few chapters and the illustrations are absolutely gorgeous. I loved how the main characters were the only colored parts of the panel, it made for really striking visuals. As the first volume wore on, however, I started to wonder where the plot was going. There were characters introduced and a few events, but nothing of substance was really happening.
“I won’t say I’m not nervous… Because I am. Nervous about growing up and taking hold of the things I want out of life.”
There was a convenient amnesia plot which is a trope that I really dislike, because the entire plot is withheld intentionally. I hoped for more answers from the second plot and it quickly became a bore waiting for some answers to finally be given to the reader. There are chases and a little bit of action but everything felt rushed. Characters are taken out just as quickly as they are introduced, somehow an important piece of the plot but readers are never given any real time to care about them or their fates. There is little to no development of the plot or it’s characters at all.
Things pick up at the end when the antagonist basically tells the main characters the big secret around the amnesia plot, which again, goes back to why I don’t like these sorts of stories to begin with. Nothing makes sense until the big reveal which means that the plot will be weak without it. While I liked the revelations at the end, it was so out of left field it didn’t have a strong impact. I just wish that the plot could have been fleshed out better and more attention could have been paid to the characters to make me care about them more. There’s a romance but it makes no sense and I couldn’t really feel it.
The quality and detail in the art also went down in the second volume as compared to the first which just added to the feeling that this series was a little rushed. I did like the central message about dreams, desires, and aspirations, even if it wasn’t developed well. It’s a very good message about how dreams can be both good and bad and how easy it is to hold yourself back with fear. I just wish this story could have been executed better because it had a lot of potential.
- What are your thoughts on amnesia plots?
- Can a lack of development ruin a story?
- How beautiful is the art though?
Book InformationMakeshift Miracle by Jim Zub, Shun Hong Chan
Published by Udon Entertainment on 2001-2003
Genres: Coming of Age, Fantasy
A teenager named Colby Reynolds feels disconnected from the world around him, until a mysterious girl literally falls into his life, and starts him on an adventure he’ll never forget!